Assignment 9

Going back through my article, I found many different mistakes. I knew what I wanted to focus on and I did that pretty well, but one thing I failed to do was to add reasons or proof as to why I felt the way that I did. I talk a bunch about what the author maybe did wrong in their choices but dont really back it up with proof. For example, in my essay talking about Susan Orlean's "Life Like", my main focus throughout my writing was that she misused her quotes. This is a good point and argument but without giving more reasons as to why I felt that way, then I don't think my purpose is going to be as strong as it should.