I found it interesting that some of the students thought about Orleans writings the way that they did. Having read over her article a few times before reading how my class felt, I don't think that I would have thought about half of the same things.
The fact that I make such an emphasis about Orlean's use of quotes is one of my most interesting things about my writing. After reading about what other students have been writing on, not very may people have decided to focus on that, which makes me feel a little unique.
Going into more depth with some of my arguments is going to need to happen. Although I feel like I have a good start to a strong argument or interpretation, it is still in need to get stronger.
My first essay was a hot mess to be quite honest. After reading it, I wasnt really sure if I had thought about who my audience might be. Now with this being said my later revised drafts of my essay, I felt like my audience were just like me. Being someone who has never heard of taxidermy and didn't have an opinion on the subject.
The tone of my writings have been a little straight forward at times but also allowing there to be room for other opinions and thoughts. I think it is important to get your point across right away rather than just beat around the bush.
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